Tuesday, February 21, 2017

Remember story

Tuesday 7th February, 2017

Remember. . .
Flopped in the car singing and sleeping to Auckland?

Beep beep went the car
Trying to sleep but getting annoyed with irritating noises because I was exhausted from packing the car.
Going to my little baby cousin's birthday in Auckland and stay at my cousin's house and resting peacefully seeing our cousins.
That was summer.

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I was learning to notice and use the structure of a piece of writing to create my holiday descriptive writing.
The success criteria is to start with I remember or Remember.
Next write what you were doing.
After write something that was is happening.
Forth write something that you did.
Fifth write why you did that something.
I think I need to put descriptive words in.
I think I put lots of writing in.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Yuktha. Those long trips to Auckland in the car can be a bit hard in these temperatures. Thanks for sharing your story and I hope hanging out with your cousins was fun. I look forward to seeing more of your posts this year.