Wednesday, March 8, 2017

My amazing descriptive Tangelo writing!!

Tuesday 21st February, 2017
The Tangelo

The tangelo is as sweet as a lollies.
The tangelo feels as squishy as slime.
It smells like a orange.
It sounds like a crack in a piece of paper.
It taste like an orange.

I was learning to use descriptive language and words. We used our five senses smells, feels, smells, looks like, tastes like. I think I need to work on to put more writing in and descriptive words in.

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