Tuesday 21st February, 2017
The Tangelo
The tangelo is as sweet as a lollies.
The tangelo feels as squishy as slime.
It smells like a orange.
It sounds like a crack in a piece of paper.
It taste like an orange.
I was learning to use descriptive language and words. We used our five senses smells, feels, smells, looks like, tastes like. I think I need to work on to put more writing in and descriptive words in.
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