My Amazing Powtoon!!

My amazing descriptive Tangelo writing!!

Tuesday 21st February, 2017

The Tangelo

The tangelo is as sweet as a lollies.

The tangelo feels as squishy as slime.

It smells like a orange.

It sounds like a crack in a piece of paper.

It taste like an orange.

I was learning to use descriptive language and words. We used our five senses smells, feels, smells, looks like, tastes like. I think I need to work on to put more writing in and descriptive words in.

Remember story

Tuesday 7th February, 2017

Remember. . .

Flopped in the car singing and sleeping to Auckland?

Beep beep went the car

Trying to sleep but getting annoyed with irritating noises because I was exhausted from packing the car.

Going to my little baby cousin's birthday in Auckland and stay at my cousin's house and resting peacefully seeing our cousins.

That was summer.

I was learning to notice and use the structure of a piece of writing to create my holiday descriptive writing.

The success criteria is to start with I remember or Remember.

Next write what you were doing.

After write something that was is happening.

Forth write something that you did.

Fifth write why you did that something.

I think I need to put descriptive words in.

I think I put lots of writing in.

My amazing delicious yum Christmas Menu!! Merry Christmas!!

Hi everyone, this is my Christmas menu. Hope you like it and Merry Christmas!!

My amazing fantastic Bird Feeder!!

For Oral Language we presented our bird feeders. First we went with our reading groups and then we went with Shirley. We went to the whare and we read the story and then we made the bird feeder. The next day we had to do a google drawing of our own bird feeder design. Thank you  and I hope you try it.

How to look after a adult bird!

Hi, in reading we learned how to look after a bird. I hope you like my google docs. Thank you.

ACTION WORLD!!!

Last week, the whole school went to Action World.  The seniors went after morning tea. My favorite rides were the water slide and the Airtop. We went with room 5,7 and 8. The water slide was the best because it was really relaxing and cold!